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janirotluvx, February 1st, 2008, 7:30 pm

S.... sh... shoujo..... ness.... *dies*

Anyways, I sense the grammar error but XD;;; Please let me know if I got something wrong T_T;

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Kokkoii-Matoku, February 1st, 2008, 7:33 pm

Awww ^^ THAT'S so sweet.

I dun see nothing.
Your good!!! ^w^ not like i'd care neway

TippyTrippy, February 1st, 2008, 7:34 pm

I'm not sure.......I suck with grammar too sorry.This page is nicely done though,good job.(thumbs up)

CheeseIshGude, February 1st, 2008, 7:34 pm

Prettyyy~ >8D
The only grammar problem is that it's suppose to be "It was the happiest moment of my life..." It's not a big problem though~

Riku__fangirl, February 1st, 2008, 7:34 pm

50 fans and you only have 2 pages?! O.o *is envious* I love it so far and you can color great ^^

Manyan, February 1st, 2008, 7:44 pm

IT'S SO LOVELY~~~. <333
I know I'll love this comic VERY, VERY much. :DD

TacoTotes, February 1st, 2008, 7:51 pm

aww I have no clue what to expect from this story other than the fact that it will be nicely drawn :D and cuuuute. I always love your characters eyebrows (dont ask) but they just like come off of their heads and it adds much personality. I'm looking forward to seeing this...:D faved !

janirotluvx, February 1st, 2008, 7:55 pm

Thanks guys ;_;!

Cheeseishgude - aight! ty ;_;

iAndrya, February 1st, 2008, 7:59 pm

Soo cuteeee! D: -Glomps.- O__o

bayadmuna, February 1st, 2008, 8:07 pm

grammar's fine..... aaagh!!! the burning curse of shoujo mangas!!! help!! XD

janirotluvx, February 1st, 2008, 9:20 pm

Thanks guys ;_;

Tsubaki_Akia, February 1st, 2008, 9:45 pm

I usually don't read shoujo-ly mangas but this sounds really cute. >33

I really love how you draw hands and legs. They are the hardest for me to draw .. >//>

I think your grammar is fine by the way. =D

janirotluvx, February 1st, 2008, 10:03 pm

Thank you so much >///<

Yeahh ;_; *struggles everytime I drew these body parts ;;

Isu, February 1st, 2008, 10:06 pm

Its all good ^__^ <3 BWA you drew those flowers didn't you >_< talent!

janirotluvx, February 2nd, 2008, 6:39 pm

Thanks guys ;;!

Issun- Naww ;_; I made the one that's floating around but other than that, the flowers are tones *u* *but arranged some around ;u;

avanope, February 2nd, 2008, 7:42 pm

so cuteee *A* I love how clean your pages always turn out

Hersheys (Guest), February 2nd, 2008, 8:22 pm

Too lazy to log in~

Anywayz~! No grammar errors, maybe missing a period or something, but periods suck XD

Looks awesome so far >w<

Iris Purple, February 3rd, 2008, 12:51 am

I really like the sketchy look you gave this!

As for grammar I agree with you, it seems ever so slightly stilted. For me the flow improves when you place "that" in and take out the "it", so it reads. "The moment THAT you became mine was the happiest moment of my life..."

Not that I'm the best with grammar!

CITRUS.LOVE, February 3rd, 2008, 3:55 am

aww... how sweet >w<!!

love the flowers too >o<!!

Natsuki, February 3rd, 2008, 6:33 pm

I... Already love it!! >u<

janirotluvx, February 3rd, 2008, 11:33 pm

Aww ty guys ;; *huggg*

*works on next page asap* *3*

MyaKonekko, February 4th, 2008, 3:18 pm

SPARKLES~ Sketcheh sketcheh sketcheh~ *_* SHOUJONESH!

Kitsu, February 4th, 2008, 3:19 pm

Kore wa kawaii manga desu!

janirotluvx, February 4th, 2008, 8:30 pm

ty guys TuT <3

kairi_kazumi, February 28th, 2008, 5:49 am

ahhh... very shoujo likeness. really cute. ^^

janirotluvx, March 11th, 2008, 12:28 pm

ty ;; <3

kenda, March 16th, 2008, 10:37 am

I know your style! you are in deviantart!! =0

good to see you here! =D

AnimetorLily, June 22nd, 2008, 8:24 am

Heyya Mayu! ^^ *waves* <-- just got a SJ account

janirotluvx, June 22nd, 2008, 9:48 pm

ty Kenda ;;

Lily-chann ;___;!! omggg hihi ;A: welcomee ;;!!*hope to see your manga here too ;u;!

Lahime, August 6th, 2008, 3:42 am

You have a lovely style *hearts* instant fav :D

ShyLala, January 9th, 2009, 10:40 am

so adorableee<33

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